Today we pitched our idea to the whole class and our teachers ms, khan and ms berry. the feedback we received were not really positive as our idea was confused and not explained properly. the setting we choose didn't appeal to the teachers and the class members wanted more of the back story such as why she takes medicine, whats mental health issue has she got, when did she get it why did she get it etc. Furthermore our idea linked to many of the other students work within the class which let down the fact that our story will not have a (USP) unique selling point.
Due to the feedback and a short meeting with all my group members we have decided to change our idea entirely and will pitch the new idea on a separate occasion either to the whole class or our teachers.
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